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WHAT IF Shin The Supreme Kai Trained Like Goku? Part 5 A Dragon Ball Dis...
Alright, Zamasu
time to do that thing we do to become immensely more powerful. Oh wait a minute
Zamasu… Zamasu…
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So welcome
to
What if Shin
the Supreme Kai trained Like Goku part 5
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Zamasu has
been captured and concealed by the Mafuba thank to Future Trunks and Supreme
Kai after all unlike Goku Supreme Kai made sure they had the sealing tag. So
does this means the good guys have pretty much won right… right? Nope wrong
that would have been too easy.
Pretty much
with Future Mai and Bulma are left holding the bag as it were or in this case
sealing Jar. Goku Black is having a hard time not only contending with Goku and
Vegeta but Future Trunks and Supreme Kai as well.
However Goku
Black is not going down without a fight that Super Saiyan rose is til quite the
power to contend with after all.
And out of
sheer desperation Goku black is able to overpower the four of them as he
notices Mai and Bulma with the sealing Jar.
“To think
the other, me was captured like this so easily. It’s pitiful really I should
leave to him his fate.” Still Goku Black is able to snatch the jar from Bulma.
And releases
Zamasu from the jar Goku Black takes a good look at Bulma.
“Funny I’m
pretty sure I remember killing you as he’s powering up a Kiblast to kill Present
day Bulma and Future Mai.
However
Trunks is able to divert their attention.
This is
where just like in the anime Zamasu and Goku Black do the Potaro fusion. They
become immensely powerful.
The battle
rages on and it looks like evil is going to win buildings are destroyed fire
everywhere. This is when the alternate timeline version of Zamasu’s master
appears along with with Kibito who insists on assisting his Master Shin.
Actually he was sent by Beerus when Beerus nearly had a heart attack that Shin
went with Goku to fight Goku Black and Zamasu. Because of that not only do we
get the return of Vegito in Potaro fusion but Kibito Kai or Kibito Shin if you
prefer.
And Well
things are not looking good for Zamasu as he is easily being beat by the
combined force of this Vegito and Kibito Kai. Not to mention Trunks gets that
mysterious power up from all the surviving humans and with his assistance the
fight ends before goku and Vegeta’s time in the Potaro fusion runs out. However
just like in the original Zamasu is freed from his body and is prepared to
consume the this universe as a all powerful entity of darkness. I don’t know
how else to describe it. And Just like in the original goku presses the Grand
Zeno button and Grand Zeno destroys Future Trunks universe and Zamasu along
with it. We all know what happens from there Universe 7 gets another Grand Zeno
and Goku is off the hook in having to be the Omni kings play mate.
So with
Trunks and Mai able to continue their lives in a pocket universe I believe that’s
how it was explained Bottomline is peace is restored once again and that’s where
we will leave things for now so what did you guys think will Supreme Kai or
Kibito Kai be able to assist in the Tournament of power is Kibito Kai still
considered a deity doesn’t fusion make him a different person hmm interesting
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again next time catch you all later
Wednesday, 26 July 2023
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Thursday, 18 March 2021
WHAT IF Zarbon Turned Good? A Dragon Ball Discussion
WHAT IF Zarbon Turned Good? A Dragon Ball Discussion
Hey guys today I pose the question to the Dragon Ball world what would happen if a certain highly trusted member of the Frieza force switched sides during the Namek saga. What If Zarbon Turned Good how would this change affect the Namek saga and the rest of the events of Dragon Ball Z #DragonBall #DragonBallZ #DragonBallSuper. https://www.lulu.com/spotlight/RMcomics https://indyplanet.com/ryan-james-melrose https://twitter.com/ToshioRy https://teespring.com/stores/ryanmelrosecomics-store https://tapas.io/melrosejryan/series https://www.facebook.com/rmcomics
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WHAT IF FRIEZA BECAME IMMORTAL ON NAMEK A DRAGONBALL DISCUSSION
WHAT IF FRIEZA BECAME IMMORTAL ON NAMEK A DRAGONBALL DISCUSSION
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WHAT IF Gine The Mother Of Goku Survived? 4 A Dragon Ball DIscussion Gine In Otherworld Reunion With Bardock
WHAT IF Gine The Mother Of Goku Survived? 4 A Dragon Ball DIscussion Gine In Otherworld Reunion With Bardock
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Monday, 8 March 2021
WHAT IF Frieza Conquered Kanassa The Novel Chapters 8, 9 and 10
What If Frieza Conquered Kanassa Novelisation
Chapter 8
Piccolo
And
The Farmer
It had been
a beautiful day on the planet Earth clear blue skies. Cool and breezy winds it
had been like this since the 23rd Tenkaichi Budokai and Goku once
again faced off against Piccolo 5 years ago. Piccolo was a ruthless tyrant that
twice threatened the Earth. However, since his reincarnation Piccolo has well
been more grumpy than evil. Today for Piccolo he was standing atop a mountain
overlooking a Wasteland keeping to himself plotting revenge on his hated enemy
Goku.
“This time
I’ll finish you for good Goku.”
Meanwhile heading
into Earths orbit was the Saiyan space pod containing a vengeful Raditz who is
seeking to eliminate his brother Kakarot. In Almost an instant the space Pod
hits the ground the countryside shaking on impact. A nearby Farmer who was
working his field witnessed the crash and proceeded to investigate it. As he
approached the huge Crater he was horrified to see the strange round object
before him.
He had
swallowed his fear and began to venture down when suddenly the Pod door opens
and this gigantic man with a Tail steps out. The farmer held out a riffle
pointing it straight at Raditz.
“Now that’s
enough right there ya hear. Uh don’t take one more step.” The farmer said as he
started stepping back.
Not watching
where he was going The farmer tripped on a rock accidentally discharging his
weapon hitting Raditz on the Frieza mask. Raditz stood over the Farmer taking
the Riffle from the Farmer snapping it in two.
“Please I
don’t want no trouble I was just protecting myself.” The farmer pleaded with
Raditz for his life but those cries for mercy were lost on the broken down
Saiyan. And with one step Raditz ended The Farmers life crushing his head blood
staining his boot.
Raditz
looked around using the inbuilt Scouters on his masks eyes. He looked around
til he found a power lever of 320 not to far in the front direction he was
facing.
With that
Raditz took to the skies heading straight for the powerlevel.
The Power
level turned out to be Piccolo. Raditz is frozen with terror at this
approaching power he can sense. It had been a power he had never sensed before
for it was insanely powerful too powerful to comprehend.
As Raditz
closed in staring at Piccolo.
Piccolo
could only regain his composure as began talking to the stranger.
“You lost or
something?” Piccolo asked. Raditz stood there and said nothing just kept
staring at him.
“Look I
suggest you leave if you value your life I don’t entertain much.” Piccolo said
sounding demanding like he had forgotten how powerful this being is.
“Kakarot!”
Raditz merely uttered.
“I don’t
know any Kakarot now beat it you’re making me mad.” Piccolo warned once again,
still Raditz merely stood staring.
“Fine you
asked for it!” Piccolo said charging a Ki Blast firing it directly at Raditz.
“I tried to
warn you creep you brought this on yourself.. what!!” Piccolo suddenly said
with a jolt of fear as the smoke cleared and Raditz stood un harmed.
“What kind
of monster are you?” Piccolo asked and again no answer Raditz merely fired a Ki
Blast destroying Piccolo where he stood. The Blast was so intense almost
overkill. Of course with Piccolo gone that means Kami’s gone and the Dragon
Balls are gone as well.
Raditz took
to the sky once again searching for another power level. He soon detects
another power level quite a bit further a way with a power level 330. Raditz
headed off in that direction at full speed.
Chapter 9
Unexpected help
It was a fun
happy day on Turtle Island home of Master Roshi for the old dragon team were
all there enjoying a reunion. Goku was excited to introduce everyone to his 4
year old son Gohan. Goku wish he could socialize more however Chi-Chi wouldn’t
allow it. Needless to say Goku was enjoying every moment for this was the first
time since the wedding of Goku and Chi-Chi Goku had seen his friends.
Goku often
thought about training with his friends just like old times, however Chi-Chi
made clear his responsibilities as a father and husband.
There
celebrations were brought to a halt when Goku felt an approaching power the
likes of which he hadn’t felt before.
Surely it
can’t be Piccolo this was too powerful even for him. No it wasn’t Piccolo this
energy he was feeling was nothing short of pure rage and it was heading
straight for them. This power froze Goku in his boots it took him almost a
second for him to find his words.
“Bulma do
you have something we can use to evacuate the Island?” Goku asked.
“Yes I do”
Bulma responded throwing a Dino cap towards the Ocean revealing a Submarine.
“Bulma get
everyone out of here and watch my son.”
Before Bulma
could argue Goku took to the air to meet this threat. Moments later Raditz was
face to face with his brother at last.
“What brings
you to this Island? If you’re here to start trouble you have been asked to
leave.”
Raditz stood
there in the air his only response was clenching his fists and he began powering
up. The mere force of his energy begins to overwhelm Goku. However Goku kept
his gaze finally Raditz spoke one word that was more like a battle cry.
“KAKAROT!!”
Suddenly Raditz power rose again and a change had come over Raditz. His hair
sticking up, turning a bright yellow color, and becoming cloaked in a yellow
Aura.
“Wow no way
this is insane” Goku said as he readied a fighting stance preparing for this
Behemoth to attack. Not that there was much he could do against this kind of
power, as Raditz began a powerful blow that could end his brother right then
and there suddenly. Raditz came under attack as his armour was scratched by a
pair of green arms and claws.
Raditz had
been surrounded by six familiar creatures that made very distinctive noises.
“Wragghh
Eyaghh Errrt Urrrghh!!!!” They were the Saibamen and behind Raditz stood Nappa
and Vegeta.
“That’s
enough Raditz stand down immediately or I’ll be forced to destroy you” Vegeta
said with a smirk. However deep down vegeta was hiding his fear for he recognised
this form as the legendary Super Saiyan. Theres no way they have a chance and
he knows it.
Raditz was
not backing down as he began engaging with the Saibamen in combat. With in one
strike he smashed a Saibamen to pieces.
Vegeta and
Nappa had to join the engagement speeding towards raditz at full force. Goku
looking on confused.
“Listen to
me Kakarot if you want to get out of this alive you got to help us.”
“Kakawhat?”
Are you talking to me?”
“Of course
I’m talking to you don’t know on your own name.” Vegeta asked getting more
impatient by the second.
Goku had
begun to engage. It was an endless barrage of attacks. With Goku and his new
allies just trying not to get hit. For they knew one hit meant death.
Suddenly a
big blue energy blast had hit Raditz out of nowhere. Goku looked around to see
Krillin flying just behind. Nappa and raditz were equally surprised seeing this
little Bald mans power level rise at a single point like.
“Maybe we
have a chance” Vegeta said staring right at Krillin. “Hey Short guy I hope you
have more tricks than that to get us out of this. And Indeed, Krillin did have
another hand to play flying in the path of the sun bringing his hands to his
face and with a loud cry.
“SOLARFLARE!!”
The blinding
Solarflare technique was what they needed to escape. Vegeta quickly fired a Ki
blast directly at Raditz face damaging the inbuilt scouters so Raditz couldn’t
track them.
And with a
mad dash for Bulma’s submarine they escaped undetected.
It had been
very crammed inside the submarine especially with Nappa inside.
“And I
thought the Space Pods were bad.”
“Suck it up
Nappa until we’re out of danger this is the best we can do” Vegeta said.
The
Submarine dived and disappeared into the darkness of the Ocean.
While Raditz
finally regained his sight he could no longer see them. His inbuilt scouter
damaged. Raditz could only fly around aimlessly.
Chapter 10
The Enemy Is Your
Brother
It had been
a surprisingly quiet Submarine ride considering the 2 new mysterious
passengers. For nearly half and hour no one spoke a word, Sure they were all
full of questions Vegeta and Nappa included however no one spoke. Until Bulma
set the Submarine on auto pilot.
“Well, that
should do it we should be at West city in a couple of hours.” She said as she
turned around looking at everybody. She looked to the two new arrivals Nappa
and Vegeta and she noticed something familiar about the two of them their
tails.
“Goku look
they have tails just like you use to have remember?”
Goku looked
bewildered as he examines the two of them also noticing the Tails.
“Hey Bulma!
you’re right they do have tails.
“Of course,
we have tails Kakarot we’re Saiyans just like you?”
“Saiyans
what’s that?” Goku asked.
Vegeta and
Nappa were now the ones looking bewildered by this did Kakarot no nothing of
his heritage or where he had come from.
“Come on
Kakarot quit kidding around you know you belong to the mighty warrior Race the
Saiyans”uh right”? Nappa asked seeming more confused.
“Kakarot did
you ever suffer a blow to the head when you were really young.” Vegeta asked.
“Um yeah a
long time ago when I was still an infant why?”
“Oh my god
you’ve forgotten everything haven’t you Kakarot I was hoping not to give you a
history lesson.”
For the next
two hours on their way to West City Vegeta and Nappa spent the entire trip
filling in the dragon team. Everything from the history of the Saiyans to Planet
Vegeta’s eventual destruction. They filled everyone in on their attacker
including the fact that he is Raditz the elder son of Gine and Bardock and the
older brother of Goku.
He filled
him in all about Frieza and what Frieza had done to Raditz. Surprisingly,
everyone took it all well.
After
hearing everything Bulma was the only one to address the Elephant in the room.
“So are you
here to take our world?” she asked with deep concern.
Vegeta
merely smirked at her.
“Relax
woman! We have no interest in your planet if I really wanted it I’d have killed
you all already.”
“Hey that’s
not very nice apologize” Goku demanded.
Vegeta
looking bewildered again. Did this low class Saiyan just demand I apologize? Me
A Saiyan apologize what kind of a Saiyan demands an apology I thought Raditz
was a disgrace to the Saiyans.
Nappa stood there
just be wildered as vegeta, Was this guy trying to get himself killed no one has
had the nerve to talk to Vegeta like that except for his parents.
At long last
they had arrived at West City Bulma had raised the Submarine to the surface and
everyone departed.
With a bit
of a walk They made it over to Bulma’s home at Capsule Corp. There was plenty
of room for everyone to stay including Nappa and Vegeta.
While
everyone was settling in Vegeta, Nappa and Kakarot sat around a table with
Bulma trying to come up with a plan. Vegeta kept staring at Goku even though he
had no memories of being a Saiyan Vegeta could tell Goku was more of a Saiyan
than his brother. Even though Goku was weaker than his brother with a power
level of 330 he stood up to a Super Saiyan. Not only that he stood up to him the
Prince of all Saiyans.
Vegeta
wouldn’t admit it but he was already started to respect Goku.
They sat in
silence for quite a while not being able to come up with much.
“Vegeta I
don’t know we’re going to get out of this one” Nappa said rubbing his head.
Vegeta had
noticed Gohan running around playing.
“Hey Kakarot
is your son over there?” he asked with a tone of curiosity.
“Yes he is
why?” Goku asked.
“Don’t you
know what this means Kakarot if your son is half Saiyan he could have untapped
potential greater than ours” Vegeta said.
“Not that it
matters it would take us years of training to catch up to Raditz and stop Frieza.”
“Yeah and
without the Dragon Balls we can’t undo what has been done.”
“The what?”
Vegeta asked getting to his feet.
“The Dragon
Balls we have them here on Earth if you collect all 7 the eternal dragon will
grant you any wish you want.” Goku said.
“Vegeta and
Nappa were speechless at this information.”
“WHAT! Why
can’t use these Dragon Balls explain” Vegeta demanded.
“You said
you found Piccolo’s body what did you call him a Namekian? Well if Piccolo dies
the Dragon Balls don’t work without him.”
At that
moment Vegeta put 2 and 2 together that the legends of the wish orbs of planet
Namek were true. There was namekian here that can’t be a coincidence a plan was
beginning.
“We can go
to Planet namek and use their Dragon Balls” Vegeta suddenly said. “Still we
still have the problem of not being strong enough to take on the likes of
Raditz and Frieza.”
“I’d forget
about it Vegeta it’s not like our space Pods will fit us all.” Nappa said
taking swig of an enormous Beer.
“Don’t worry
about that boys” Bulma said. “If you hand over your Pods to me my dad and I can
build it into a bigger room for all of us to go to Namek.”
“It’s too
bad the gravity is too weak if it were stronger we could catch up to Raditz no
problem.” Vegeta said staring intensely at his glass.
“Done I’ll
add a gravity chamber to the ship and makes sure there’s room for you guys to
train.” Bulma said sounding enthusiastic about the challenge.
“Wow you can
really do that Bulma” Goku asked getting to his feet ready for some hard hitting
training.
“Have I ever
failed us” Bulma said with a smile.
“Woman!”
Vegeta said abruptly. “What’s your name?”
“My name is
Bulma and don’t you forget it Saiyan.”
“You know
what you’re alright Bulma.” Vegeta said.
“So Bulma
how long to build a ship.” Goku asked seeming eager.
“It will
take a few weeks atleast two If I really hustle” Bulma said with wrench already
in hand.
“Alright”
Goku responded as Vegeta gets to his feet looking to Goku.
“Kakarot do
you know a place where we can train preferably somewhere Raditz won’t spot us?”
Vegeta asked.
Goku stood
there arms folded and thinking hard until suddenly it came to him.
“The
Hyperbolic Time chamber on kami’s look out we can get a whole years training in
there for one day.” Goku said with excitement.
This new
creates a spark of hope to Nappa and Vegeta.
“Then what
are we waiting for Kakarot lets get going” Nappa said already on his way out.
“Hmm this
just might work after all” Vegeta said looking at Gohan then he looked to
Kakarot.
“Bring your
son Kakarot it’s time he knew what he was made of.” Vegeta said taking to the
air Goku took hold of his son Gohan and they followed suit with Krillin tagging
along.
Sunday, 7 March 2021
WHAT IF Vegeta Was Female Parts 1 to 8
WHAT IF Vegeta Was Female Parts 1 to 8
WHAT If Vegeta was female explores what might happen if the Prince of all Saiyans was female starting from When she and Nappa arrive on Earth looking for Kakarot. To their legendary battle on Earth through the Frieza and Namek saga now entering the Android saga how will thongs differ with the Princess Of All Saiyans Vegeta.
plus check out the full What If Vegeta was female ongoing series here
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What If Cell Junior Turned Good
Part 7
Saturday, 6 March 2021
WHAT IF Frieza Saw Bardocks Potential A Dragon Ball Discussion
WHAT IF Frieza Saw Bardocks Potential A Dragon Ball Discussion
Hey guys today I thought I would kick things off with a brand new Dragon Ball What If. WHAT If Frieza Saw Bardock's Potential. A story where Frieza decides to spare Bardock and his crew from the fate of their Race and exploiting the potential of Bardock and his crew to do more of his bidding please like and subscribe and lets get this discussion going.
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Friday, 5 March 2021
WHAT If Cheelai Came To Eart? A Dragon Ball DIscussion
WHAT If Cheelai Came To Earth? A Dragon Ball DIscussion
Hey guys DB Ry here back with a Brand new WHAT IF. After the events of Majin Buu Earht has been at peace not so much as a tyrant with a power level of 1000. Until Intergalactical Serial thief Cheelai crashes to Earth fleeing from the Galactic Patrol. Oh what mess is have the Dragon team got themselves into now
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Wednesday, 3 March 2021
What If Gine The mother Of Goku Survived Part 3 A Dragon Ball Discussion
What If Gine The Mother Of Goku Survived
A Dragon Ball Discussion
It's never easy for a mother to let go of her child especially for the Saiyan Gine. But What if Gine got to go with her son Kakarot to Earth and be a part of his life. This is that story as we head to the conclussion of King Piccolo arc.
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Sunday, 28 February 2021
What If Frieza Conquered Kanassa Novel Chapters 4, 5, 6 and 7
Novelisation continued
Chapter
4 Frieza and King Cold
A few weeks
had past, since the destruction of Planet Vegeta and Frieza still struggles to
get use to these visions. Even though Planet Vegeta and Bardock were destroyed
Frieza still sees a vision of a Super Saiyan defeating him in battle on the
mysterious green planet. He thought it was ridiculous, if planet Vegeta was
destroyed why is he still seeing visions of the same Saiyan opposing him. After
all, to his knowledge only Nappa, Prince Vegeta and Raditz were the only
survivors and they serve him willingly.
These
visions were beginning to effect Frieza’s life in all kinds of negative ways
especially in terms of lack of sleep.
Rumours of
his health and well being have began circulating to the entire Frieza force
ever since he was struck by the Kanassan High General. The men were beginning
to think that Frieza is weak, that he is incapable of leadership that he’s
vulnerable and now was the time for a mutiny.
“Come on men
Frieza is not invincible if we all rise up against him, we can take him and his
ships.”
With those
words there was a riot Mutineers battling with Frieza loyalists. The Mutineers
were winning with a surprise attack forcing some of the Loyalists to flee to
other ships that remained loyal to Frieza. While other loyalists were held
hostage.
Victory was
the mutineers having taken over half of Frieza’s fleet. When suddenly Frieza
himself was flying through space on his personal transport.
Zarbon and
Dodoria looking on wondering just what Lord Frieza is up to.
“No he
wouldn’t that’s half the fleet some of our men are still aboard fighting”
Zarbon said watching on in horror as their master fires a similar attack to the
one that destroyed Planet Vegeta wiping out half his fleet, all mutineers and
thousands of his own loyal men.
As Frieza
entered his ship Zarbon looked at his master with an expression of terror.
“Frieza why
would you do that that was hardly.” Before Zarbon could finish his sentence Frieza
blew both Zarbon and Dodoria away. Two of his most trusted Lieutenants.
“Does anyone
else dare question me? speak now and forever rest in peace.” His men were too
terrified to react.
“Good that’s
what I thought let that be a lesson to all of you questioning me or my
capabilities is an extremely dangerous thing get the picture? Great! I believe
we’re done here.”
Frieza then
left to go into his chambers. He began to rest his eyes when he has more
visions of the Super Saiyan. Frieza snaps to his feet angry.
“WHY WHY DO
YOU HAUNT ME SO.” Frieza screamed as his power began leaking out blowing his
door open and nearly hitting this short blue creature who was on his way to see
Frieza.
“Yes, a who
are you?” Frieza asked regaining his composure.
“I am Sorbet
milord you wished to see me.”
“Ah yes you
see with Zarbon and Dodoria gone I’m in need a new right-hand man you seem to
fit the bill. I admit you’re a lot weaker than I would have liked, but I hear
you follow orders to the letter is that correct or am I mistaking?”
“No mistake Lord
Frieza I run a very tight shift your will is my command and the command of
every soldier on this ship.”
“Good that’s
just what I wanted to hear, well Sorbet I have your first job should you hear
any words of mis loyalty you’re to bring them before me so they can face my
justice sound easy enough.”
“Yes milord I
will have these soldiers whipped into shape in no time I will make our army
stronger count on it.”
With that
Sorbet took his leave and took his new job very seriously. After all it’s not
every day you get to work with Frieza directly. This had been Sorbet ambition
since joining the Frieza force. Climbing the ranks through his intellect rather
his strength had won him the job he always wanted. As for Frieza he seemed to
be in good spirits again yet something about what Sorbet said stuck with him.
About making his army stronger, perhaps Frieza himself could become stronger.
Was this possible, he didn’t know, there had been no need to train he was born
like this. Perhaps if he trains and gets stronger, he could throw this whole
ridiculous Super Saiyan prophecy on its head and what better way to train than going
out in the front line. Perhaps showing his strength will keep his soldiers in
line not to mention boost morale it’s a win win.
From that
day forth Lord Frieza did every conquest himself. Displaying his frightening
powers before his enemies, he forced warlords to their knees. Made governments
give up their planet. In time just as Frieza predicted he did grow stronger
tapping into a power that as a far as he knew only his brother Cooler had
achieved before him. Frieza believed he was ready for the Super Saiyan.
One day he
was returning from yet another conquest he walked up to the bridge of his Ship
to find his father King Cold standing there.
“Father?
what are you doing on my bridge?” Frieza said sounding bewildered and surprised.
“Oh, my dear
son I’m sorry to drop in like this! However, I have heard some troubling
rumours about you lately my boy.”
“Rumours?
What kind of rumours are you talking about father?”
“I heard you
were injured on Kanassa and that you destroyed half the fleet, that you even
killed Zarbon and Dodoria two loyal soldiers who have served me since before
you were born.” King cold said as he looked about the ship.
“As I can
see the rumours are true, I even hear you’re doing filthy grunt work,
conquering worlds yourself, you’re hardly the perfect son I created. Things
need to change my son.” “ As your concerned loving father I am as of now coming
out of retirement and taking back my Empire from you Frieza until you learn
what it means to rule.
“Or until
you replace me with another offspring you mean right father, you forget I was
there when you said the same thing to Cooler.”
“You dare
speak to me like that boy I’ll have to teach you some manners.”
Suddenly
King Cold charges at Frieza getting ready to deal a deadly blow, Frieza stood
their smirking and caught his father’s arm. King Cold couldn’t free himself
everyone looking out in horror, King Cold who was massive compared to Frieza
stopped in his tracks.
Frieza raises
his finger pointing directly at his own fathers’ chest.
“Your
methods are outdated father that filthy grunt work you called it is what I call
the key to my true potential.”
King Cold
couldn’t move all he could do was look at his son with a look of both
resentment and terror.
“You’ve
allowed yourself to go soft father I won’t be making that mistake.” Frieza said
with a grin that meant one thing.
“WAIT
FRIEZA!!! King Cold screamed as Frieza fired a death beam straight through the
heart of his father King Cold is dead.
“Sorbet have
the Janitor remove that from my sight immediately.” Frieza said motioning to
his dead father.
Frieza then
retired to his Quarters and decided to take a nap and for the first time since
before Kanassa Frieza slept soundly with a smile on his face.
Chapter
5 Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz The Battle of Tradick
Around 24
years had past since the Destruction of Planet Vegeta, only four saiyans
survived the veteran Nappa once the commander of the Saiyan military, Vegeta
the Prince of all Saiyans, Raditz the
elder son of Bardock and Gine. The last survivor was the younger brother of
Raditz Kakarot who was sent to Earth prior to the Planets destruction. A fact
only known to the three saiyans.
They were
currently on a distant planet named Tradick. They were sent to conquer it in
the name of Frieza. To this day the Saiyan trio had never failed a mission for
Frieza however were never rewarded equally compared to the rest of the Frieza
force. They fulfilled every conquest easily, well up until now atleast for the
warriors of Tradick were giving them a hard time having already killed half of
Nappa’s Saibamen. The rest laid unconscious on the battlefield. Vegeta and
Nappa for the most part were enjoying themselves picking off warriors one by
one. While Raditz appearing more cautious than his two comrades used strategy
and sneak attacks to gain the upperhand.
His fathers
wit no doubt. The only problem Raditz would never risk a life threatening
injury in order to tap into the Saiyan Zenkai boost that increases a Saiyan’s
power on recovery. However his intelligence was more than enough for these
jokers.
As Raditz
found himself out numbered by warriors he chose a tactical retreat into the
Canyon peaks. It would seem Raditz was trapped by the Canyon walls. However the
Traddick warriors were mistaking they walked right into the trap of Radits as
he fired a Ki blast at the Canyon peaks causing a devastating rock slide.
Sending boulders crashing below into the enemy while Raditz remained safe
directly beneath the peaks.
“Ha Idiots your
small minds are no match for the power of a Saiyan.” Raditz said as he began
flying back to regroup with Vegeta and Nappa.
He soon
spots Nappa having a little trouble with a group of Tradicks all attacking him
at once.
“Nappa can
you hear me?” Raditz asked with concern.
“Can’t you
see I’m a little busy Raditz? What do you want?”
“I’m to the
left of your position see if you can get them to follow you there I have a
plan.”
With that
Raditz took cover in a big crack in the ground, the next moment Nappa flew
straight by with the Tradicks closing in.
Raditz
raised his hands in the air aiming directly for the Tradicks and with a loud
cry.
“DOUBLE
SUNDAE” Raditz unleashed his devastating Double Sundae energy blast catching
the Tradicks pursuing Nappa completely off guard wiping them all out.
“Ha way to
go Raditz” Nappa said acknowledging the clever tactic.
“Yeah, not
bad for a weakling, You should try facing you’re enemy like a true Saiyan instead
of like a coward Raditz.” Vegeta said mocking his subordinate.
The wave of
Tradick warriors were defeated there 3 times the amount, of warriors ready to
attack awaiting orders. It would seem at least for today the combat had stopped.
Nappa stood with
Vegeta observing the enemy he had been in many battles back in his day and
recognised an uphill battle when he saw one. The only other time he had seen a
scenario like this was back during the conquest of Planet Tasbar.
“Vegeta I
hate to sound like Raditz here but we can’t beat all of them we need the moon.”
Nappa said hoping to talk the prince out of reckless move.
“What’s
wrong Nappa it’s not like you to act cowardly, very well perhaps a snack break
is in order.”
Vegeta and
Nappa then returned to Raditz location who had already begun a fire and began
roasting a dead Tradick. Such as Saiyan life eating dead warriors as a spoil of
war or simply survival.
The three
Saiyans sat by the campfire hardly saying a word. That was until Vegeta broke
the silence.
“So Raditz
did you even manage to square off against one of them. Or were you too busy
avoiding the fight as always.”
Raditz tried
to hide his anger on what Vegeta was saying to him begun clenching his fist
telling himself to ignore him.
“You’re a
disgrace to our entire race.” Vegeta continued. “How are you supposed to get
stronger if you don’t throw yourself into the fray.”
Raditz
didn’t react he just took it. Ironically for the first time in his life Raditz
understood what life was like for his mother who was the weakest of her kind.
The abuse she got from other Saiyan’s remembering times even Bardock out her
down, and to his shame the times even he himself felt ashamed of her. Deep down
he wishes he could tell her how sorry he was.
Raditz
however cautious he is in his point of view he was putting the mission first.
Ever since joining up with Vegeta and Nappa all those years ago they have a
high survival rate thanks to Raditz. Raditz knew this deep down that without
his tactics his way of looking at the battlefield they all would have died many
times over. He remembers the stories Gine told him about his father how they
become the top squad in Frieza’s elite it had nothing to do with power. Bardock
and his crew worked together as a team and they grew stronger together because
of it. Today Nappa would have been dust if it weren’t for his plan.
Oh yes
Raditz wanted to say this to Vegeta face and for a moment he was going to when
he spotted Nappa motioning his head as if he was saying don’t do it kid.
Raditz
realising what Nappa was trying to tell him he backed down continuing to take
it. When Vegeta finally stopped talking he decided to see what the Tradicks
were doing.
“Hey Raditz
Thanks for what you did for me out there today! That was a nice move you pulled”
Nappa said.
“Don’t
mention it if you had died that would have hurt the mission nothing more.”
Raditz responded as he takes another bite form a Tradick leg.
“Vegeta can
be harsh don’t take everything he says too seriously. However, he is right your
cautious nature, resourcefulness useful as it is you won’t get stronger unless
you fight. You know you’re father was a smart one too however despite him
starting out weak he wasn’t afraid to get his hands dirty.”
Raditz
simply stared at Nappa meeting his gaze listening.
“Hey don’t
sweat it” Nappa continued I’m sure you’ll be stronger than a Saibaman someday
Ha ha ha.”
“Very funny
Nappa.” Raditz said as he threw the rest of his Tradick Leg into Nappa’s big
mouth.
Nappa
finished off the Leg.
“mmm There a
bit spicy.”
A few
moments Vegeta had returned with news.
“The
Tradicks have set up camp now we strike.” Vegeta said eager for a fight.
“Ha now
who’s acting cowardly.” Raditz commented.
“What was
that Raditz?” Vegeta said angrily thinking he might put Raditz in the ground
and bash his skull in.
“Uh I said
The Tradicks are cowards.” Raditz said waving his hands passively.
“Vegeta even
if we surprise them with this attack we can’t beat all of them and he moon
still days away.” Nappa said sounding a little bit nervous to him this was like
Tasbar all over again. Saiyans at the mercy of the Full moon.
“Don’t worry
about moon Nappa I have a solution to that problem, I have a little trick I
picked up.” Vegeta claimed as he powers up a Energy Ball in his hand and throws
it to the sky.
“Let their
be light boys” Vegeta cried as the ball merged with the sky creating what
looked to be a moon only it wasn’t. Yet it had the Blutz wave effects on Saiyan
biology the real full moon had. Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz began to change into
their giant Ozzaru Ape forms.
Together
they ambushed the camping Tradicks killing thousands. In an instant with a
combined Ki blast from their mouths. It caused devastation to the camp. As they
began destroying the city and attacking the civilians. By daybreak, the
civilisation was destroyed along with their cities. The Saiyans were careful
not to damage any buildings of importances. After all, Frieza loves new
technology if any this planet was a longshot. At the very least they can sell
the planet to the highest bidder and still make a profit.
With that the
three Saiyans take their leave making there way back to Frieza planet 79 they
had earned some R&R.
Chapter
6 The Sons Of Bardock
It was a
time for relaxation on Frieza Planet 79 the Taverns were full, The streets were
busy everyone seemed in good spirits. Even Frieza looking above on his tower.
He’d still receive visions of the Super Saiyan however he had learned put it
out of his mind.
After all he
is much stronger now. For the first time in a while everything seemed to be
returning to normal. Frieza spent most of his time these days conquering planets
and celebrating to the point he had almost completely forgotten about the Super
Saiyan. Except for the occasional visions now and then.
“Super
Saiyan what a big joke hahahah” Frieza said staring out the window in his chair
with his glass of Wine stiring in his hand.
Suddenly at
that moment he has another vision so surprising it makes him drop his Wine that
smashes on the floor he utters one word.
“Kakarot!”
Frieza then snapas out of it holding his head as if he just had a vicious
headache. At that moment Sorbet walks in to find his master in that state.
“Lord Frieza
are you alright?” he asks with concern.
Frieza meets
Sorbet’s gaze with a look that anyone who worked could tell you meant someone
was about to die.
“Sorbet find
that miserable monkey Raditz and bring him before me immediately?”
“Yes, sir
right away.” Sorbet said sounding relief that it’s not going to be him who dies
tonight.
Meanwhile Vegeta,
Nappa and Raditz were inside the Tavern having a drink after all their hard
work in space.
A drunk
Frieza Force Soldier walks by accidentally bumping into Nappa making him spill
his drink all over himself.
“Hey why
don’t you watch where your sitting huh!!!” The drunken soldier said. as he got
a good look at who he ran into.
“Ahh Nappa
I’m sorry please I didn’t mean to.” It was too late Nappa had fired a Ki Blast
frying the unfortunate soldier. Vegeta taking a swig of his drink like nothing
happened, Raditz sitting their with a smirk on his face.
“Excuse me
Raditz!” a voice called out to him.” Raditz turned around to see Sorbet along
with a couple of his men.
“Frieza
would like a word with you Saiyan?”
Nappa,
Vegeta and Raditz all began to rise from their chairs.
“No not you
Vegeta… Just Raditz” Sorbet said with a unsettling grin.
Raditz went
with them leaving Vegeta and Nappa behind who are standing there bewildered for
this was a first. Frieza has never wanted to see Raditz alone before. Perhaps
this was a promotion Raditz thought, maybe he’s getting his own squad maybe now
he will finally be away from Vegeta. Wishful thinking I’m afraid Raditz
couldn’t be more wrong as he’s brought before the Emperor himself.
“Ah yes
Raditz do come in I fear we have much to discuss you and I?”
“We do?”
Raditz asked unsure where this was going.
“It would
seem you have been keeping secrets from me, yes you have been a naughty monkey
haven’t you Raditz.” Frieza asked waving his finger as if he was talking to a
child.
“Tell me
Raditz wheres your brother Kakarot? It would seem he escaped planet Vegeta
before it blew up didn’t he did your weak Saiyan of a mother get all
sentimental?”
Raditz
didn’t react only looked at Frieza in fear.
“I’m right
aren’t I! I know I am tell me now and I might not kill you.”
The day
Raditz had been fearing had finally come keeping the secrets of his parents. He
looked to Frieza with brave determination and simply said.
“So it was
you wasn’t it?”
“Pardon me
monkey?”
“It was you
wasn’t it Frieza? You destroyed Planet Vegeta it wasn’t a meteor at all” Raditz
angrily said. By the look on Frieza’s face he knew he was right.”
“Like I’d
tell a bastard like you anything” Raditz suddenly fell screaming as a death beam
hit his shoulder. Frieza walked to Raditz standing over him pointing a death
beam to Raditz head. At that moment Frieza had considered killing Raditz right
then and there.
“No I won’t
kill you Raditz this is the first day of the rest of your miserable life, you
see you’re going to help me even if you tell me nothing.” Frieza said as he
lowers his finger To Raditz chest and fires a death beam piercing Raditz.
“Oh Medic
come quick Raditz has had a little accident please take him to a healing
chamber immediately and when he’s all cleaned up healed and brand new again
please bring him back here.
“Lord Frieza
what are you doing?” Sorbet asked witnessing.
“It’s real
simple my minion I’m going to break him and turn Raditz into my ultimate
mindless Saiyan slave and in time he will hunt down his brother himself.”
Frieza said taking a sip of his Wine.
This cycle of
causing Raditz physical harm and the mental manipulation went on repeat for days
that went into weaks.
“You know
the only reason you’re going through this pain is because of your brother”
Frieza said as the cycle of torture and manipulation Until Raditz became
uncommonly strong thanks to the repeated use of the Zenkai Boost. And with no
will of his own Raditz was mentally reduced to that of a primal animal. Wearing
a mask of Frieza and a mere shell of himself. Raditz was even stripped of his
name and given a name literally meaning the feces he walks on.
Hence forth
his new name would be Kuso.
Chapter
7 Cooler
A few days
had passed on Frieza planet 79 when suddenly Frieza had received a visitor
arriving in a ship similar to Frieza’s. From the ship descended a small group
leaded by a being who looks a lot like Frieza in his final form. Everyone left
the streets with exception of Sorbet and his men.
“Lord Cooler
it’s been a long time what brings you here?” he asked graciously.
“Take me to
my brother.” Cooler responded
“Of course,
right this way” Sorbet said as he lead Cooler to the Tower where Frieza is
staying.
Cooler
enters Frieza’s room to find him there waiting there with this massive looking
Saiyan next to him covered in scars looking like a feral beast.
“Oh Brother
you’ve come all this way to visit me what brings you to this side of the
Galazy?” Frieza asked.
“I’ve heard
talk that you ended fathers life is that true?”
“I did
indeed brother his methods were outdated and he dared to try take control of my
Empire” Frieza said sounding proud of himself.
Cooler
clenched his feet met his brother’s gaze.
“You had no
right to do that to father!”
“Oh, I had
every right dear brother and don’t you forget it.” “Besides, I only did what
you wanted to do since he cast you out.” Lord Frieza said with his smirk
turning into a look of pure intimidation.
“I knew it
was a mistake handing over the Empire to you, You’re completely out of control.”
“Father should never have created you.” At that moment Cooler’s men began to
ready themselves.
“Oh, dear
are we going to be fighting now brother?”
“Yes, we
are” Cooler responded.
“That does
sound fun to dirty my hands with your blood however I have a new servant to do
that for me.” “Oh Kuso please show my brother and his friends here some
manners.
“Really
Frieza you’re going to have a mere monkey fight me oh how you have fallen.”
Cooler said as he powers up and strike Raditz only to find it had no effect on
him.
“What no way!”
Raditz
grabbed hold of Cooler’s arm and began twisting. Cooler went down on his knees
in pain as Raditz delivered a powerful kick sending Cooler through the walls.
Coolers Squad
tried attacking Raditz but were no match for the overpowered Saiyan who
brutally killed them one by one.
“Oh Kuso if
you can try not causing to much damage to my planet I would be much appreciated.”
Frieza said as Kuso flies through the wall holes following Cooler.
By the time
Raditz had found Cooler he had changed into his fifth form and fighting back
against the Kuso Raditz.
Cooler for a
time was winning getting on top of Raditz and excessively pounding the Saiyan
with everything he had until he ran out of breath and stopped.
Raditz at
that moment grabbed Cooler by then neck with one hand and performed like a pro
wrestling choke slam driving Cooler far into the ground.
“HE’S A
MONSTER COOLER YELLED” As Raditz fired a Double Sundae ending Cooler’s life.
Raditz then returned to his masters side.
“Well done
Kuso don’t worry about the mess the Janitor will fix that you go to your
quarters now and rest.” Frieza said and watched his monstrous creation slip
into his little holding cell. Frieza then left his chambers leaving the Kuso’s
Cell unlocked. Frieza the time was now to allow Raditz to hunt down and kill
his brother kakarot. To make sure found himself off world he ordered Kuso to
leave a space pod out for him.
And as
Frieza designed Kuso indeed left the comfort of his Cell and was wandering
around Frieza planet. Everyone scared and intimidated looking at this monster
of a Saiyan doing there best to stay away from him. Except for a certain two
individuals who spotted him heading towards.
“Hey Raditz
where have you been?” Nappa called out.
Vegeta was
instantly horrified at he was seeing, somehow, he knew what Frieza has done. He
could see all the scars, the damage to his skin. Holes from the constant death
beams. Frieza had crossed the line. Not even Raditz deserved this Vegeta was
thinking to himself.
“Hey come on
buddy lets get a cold one.” Nappa said in a friendly gesture moving to pat him
on the shoulder.
“Nappa get
away from him” Vegeta warned. However, the warning wasn’t quick enough when
Raditz struck Nappa in the face with his tail sending him into a wall.
“Hey whats
the big idea Raditz.” Nappa yelled getting to his feet.
“Nappa stand
down let him go” Vegeta said calming his teammate down.
“What do you
mean uh..” Before Nappa could finish he noticed the scars and all the damage
just as Vegeta.
“Raditz what
has Frieza done to you?”
“I don’t
know Nappa but he’ll pay for it arrhhh.”
Vegeta and
Nappa decide to follow Raditz and see him getting to a space pod.
“Wheres he
going? He has nowhere to go?” Nappa asked.
Vegeta stood
bewildered and thinking to himself until he put two and two together.
“He’s going
to Earth of course he is, he must be Frieza want’s Kakarot dead” Vegeta said
abruptly.
Vegeta looks
to Nappa with a look that terrified Nappa for this was a look Vegeta used on a
bad day.
“We have to
stop him Nappa I don’t know what this is about, but if Frieza is going to this
much trouble to kill a low class Saiyan it can’t be good”
With that
Nappa and Vegeta get to there Space pods and are off in hot pursuit of there
former comrad.
















